Payback time for Dan, doolols and Sharon Bell!!

[GrinReaper]

Hi Guys,

I owe each of you a crit, and I should be able to deliver later this week. Just let me know what story you'd like me to take a look at, and I'll get critting!!

[Dan]

Hey Grin - cheers for the offer - if you could have a read of my edited version of 'Hedonist's Paradise' (currently sat in Week 3) that would be much appreciated.

[doolols]

Don't worry about it, Grin - I'll 'bank' it if you don't mind, until I've produced something worth critting.

[GrinReaper]

Sure -- just let me know. Fire off a PM in case I'm not around. I'm trying to keep active on CafeDoom but I'm just finding the amount of time I have is tiny.