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Offline Nefarious1

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Angel of Light
« on: November 06, 2006, 04:53:11 PM »
Angel of Light

Angel of light, blanket me,
Protect me from my misery.
I no longer have the will to survive,
Blanket me from my wish to die.
See me on bended knees?,
See the tears that flow free?
Hear the pain in my heart?
Feel the agony that will not part?
Angel of light, blanket me,
I pray to thee,
Shed some warmth in this dark well,
Take me from this living hell.
Angel of light, don't abandon me!
A lost soul I will be......
Show me things can really change,
Save me from my hate and rage.
Angel of light, I beg you to see,
I need you to save me,
Save me from ME!

Darkness is my friend.

Offline SharonBell

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Re: Angel of Light
« Reply #1 on: November 06, 2006, 05:42:02 PM »
I've had a few days like that!  :'(
"Be good and you'll be lonesome." Mark Twain

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Re: Angel of Light
« Reply #2 on: November 06, 2006, 07:02:34 PM »
Sharon,
Glad to know someone else understands. I was beginning to think I was in a world of my own.
Darkness is my friend.

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Re: Angel of Light
« Reply #3 on: November 06, 2006, 11:00:03 PM »
Oh, you are NOT alone.
"Be good and you'll be lonesome." Mark Twain

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Offline bonesmacabre

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Re: Angel of Light
« Reply #4 on: November 14, 2006, 11:53:41 AM »
i very much dig the dark forboding rhythm of it. it reminds me of my birthday!!!
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Re: Angel of Light
« Reply #5 on: November 14, 2006, 07:02:14 PM »
Totally.  I was hearing music behind this as I read.  Good job!


Needs to be a metal song, man!  Nice to finally get to check out more of your stuff, Nef. :)

Offline Nefarious1

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Re: Angel of Light
« Reply #6 on: November 15, 2006, 12:28:30 AM »
Hey bones, I wrote that ON my birthday!  :bleh: And Seph, funny you should say that, because lately I have been entertaining thoughts of writing music. Thanks, everyone, for the compliments. :grin:
Darkness is my friend.

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Re: Angel of Light
« Reply #7 on: February 09, 2007, 02:07:42 PM »
It seems that this particular section of the forums is somewhat inactive.  That will change now that I'm around :P .

Nefarious, this piece is rather short, but it's certainly sweet.  The rhyme scheme is good, and with the exception of one or two lines, it flows brilliantly.  I've had my share of poems written in this manner, so I know how you felt.  Anyway, good writing.


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