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Offline SharonBell

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Cool Front Page Story, "Baby Girl"
« on: November 19, 2006, 09:55:09 PM »
Well done, Eternlnite! Very, very creepy!  :cheers: :cheers:
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Re: Cool Front Page Story, "Baby Girl"
« Reply #1 on: November 22, 2006, 03:43:05 PM »
Thanks SharonBell!
...the person who wrote that... is dangerous. And this button-down, Oxford-cloth psycho might just snap, and then stalk from office to office with an Armalite AR-10 carbine gas-powered semi-automatic weapon, pumping round after round into colleagues and co-workers.

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Re: Cool Front Page Story, "Baby Girl"
« Reply #2 on: November 22, 2006, 03:47:29 PM »
And thank you, blunt, for putting the story up and for the graphic!
...the person who wrote that... is dangerous. And this button-down, Oxford-cloth psycho might just snap, and then stalk from office to office with an Armalite AR-10 carbine gas-powered semi-automatic weapon, pumping round after round into colleagues and co-workers.

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Re: Cool Front Page Story, "Baby Girl"
« Reply #3 on: November 22, 2006, 04:15:32 PM »
Well done to you, ET - you worked very hard on that story, through re-writes and edits, without complaint :afro:  I'm glad you like the graphic.  I had a bit of trouble thinking of something suitable to put with it, but I think that one works ok.  :smiley:
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Re: Cool Front Page Story, "Baby Girl"
« Reply #4 on: November 22, 2006, 05:36:24 PM »
I seem to have lost my front page, I just get a list of forum posts now, and can't see the story :(
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Re: Cool Front Page Story, "Baby Girl"
« Reply #5 on: November 22, 2006, 07:27:30 PM »
I seem to have lost my front page, I just get a list of forum posts now, and can't see the story :(

It can't be your browser, because I use Opera too - although mine's version 8, I think.  Yours appears to be 9, according to the data logs.  The only thing I can think of is some kind of problem with the themes.  Looks like you're using pnpn theme.  Try changing your theme in your profile settings, not in the front page block - change it to SMF Default, if you want a pale theme.  See if that corrects the problem :afro:
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Re: Cool Front Page Story, "Baby Girl"
« Reply #6 on: November 23, 2006, 08:22:06 AM »
Aha, that's fixed it, cheers Ed! :afro:

Very creepy story Etrnlnite, well done! :)
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Re: Cool Front Page Story, "Baby Girl"
« Reply #7 on: November 24, 2006, 05:08:26 PM »
Thank you, Steffi.   :)
...the person who wrote that... is dangerous. And this button-down, Oxford-cloth psycho might just snap, and then stalk from office to office with an Armalite AR-10 carbine gas-powered semi-automatic weapon, pumping round after round into colleagues and co-workers.

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Re: Cool Front Page Story, "Baby Girl"
« Reply #8 on: November 25, 2006, 05:21:49 PM »
My hat's off to ya, Steffi - I never saw that ending coming.  Truly creepy!  :cheers:
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Re: Cool Front Page Story, "Baby Girl"
« Reply #9 on: November 27, 2006, 01:24:18 PM »
Twisted!!!!  : :shocked:       Where did you get the idea eternlnite?
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