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« Reply #45 on: September 22, 2009, 09:47:42 PM »
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« Reply #46 on: October 29, 2009, 06:17:48 PM »
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« Reply #47 on: January 04, 2010, 07:28:37 PM »
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« Reply #48 on: February 14, 2010, 09:48:49 PM »
WOW! Very deep and touching.... This is extremely well done. Kuddos
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« Reply #49 on: February 16, 2010, 11:59:09 AM »
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« Reply #50 on: February 27, 2010, 03:02:46 PM »
Well written; interestingly, there seemed to be a double take. The subject is tragic, but you also seemed to be a little scathing of the fact that her illness makes her self-centred. Reminded me of a poem by Larkin, "Neurotics".
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« Reply #51 on: March 08, 2010, 07:07:49 PM »
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« Reply #52 on: March 08, 2010, 07:18:50 PM »
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« Reply #53 on: March 13, 2010, 08:03:25 PM »
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« Reply #54 on: March 14, 2010, 05:44:40 AM »
Good piece of writing, but I feel it would benefit from being formatted as a paragraph rather than one sentence per line.
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« Reply #55 on: March 18, 2010, 12:32:22 AM »
a double reply - Delph!! I hardly know you  - and yet thank you for the feedback on previous posts elsewhere and the blood soaked trail of breadcrumbs here! I'm sure you'll regret it!  afro

Woody:

I really like this - I feel the passion and frustration in your words - I'll need to re-read to come up with any constructive criticism, but if I'll post if I think of anything.  Keep it up mate!  cool
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« Reply #56 on: March 18, 2010, 03:43:26 PM »
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« Reply #57 on: April 17, 2010, 08:20:58 PM »
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« Reply #58 on: December 31, 2010, 06:32:18 PM »
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« Reply #59 on: December 31, 2010, 11:00:16 PM »
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