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Offline Woody

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« Reply #45 on: September 22, 2009, 08:47:42 PM »
posting here has proven unwise. ed will keep your stuff after he bans you. only he knows why.
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« Reply #46 on: October 29, 2009, 05:17:48 PM »
posting here has proven unwise. ed will keep your stuff after he bans you. only he knows why.
« Last Edit: January 29, 2011, 06:28:44 PM by Woody »
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Offline Woody

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« Reply #47 on: January 04, 2010, 07:28:37 PM »
posting here has proven unwise. ed will keep your stuff after he bans you. only he knows why.
« Last Edit: January 29, 2011, 06:27:47 PM by Woody »
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Re: a portrait in black (new version)
« Reply #48 on: February 14, 2010, 09:48:49 PM »
WOW! Very deep and touching.... This is extremely well done. Kuddos
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« Reply #49 on: February 16, 2010, 11:59:09 AM »
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Re: a portrait in black (new version)
« Reply #50 on: February 27, 2010, 03:02:46 PM »
Well written; interestingly, there seemed to be a double take. The subject is tragic, but you also seemed to be a little scathing of the fact that her illness makes her self-centred. Reminded me of a poem by Larkin, "Neurotics".

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« Reply #51 on: March 08, 2010, 07:07:49 PM »
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« Last Edit: January 29, 2011, 06:28:13 PM by Woody »
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« Reply #52 on: March 08, 2010, 07:18:50 PM »
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« Reply #53 on: March 13, 2010, 08:03:25 PM »
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Re: The Rage
« Reply #54 on: March 14, 2010, 04:44:40 AM »
Good piece of writing, but I feel it would benefit from being formatted as a paragraph rather than one sentence per line.

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Re: The Rage
« Reply #55 on: March 17, 2010, 11:32:22 PM »
a double reply - Delph!! I hardly know you  - and yet thank you for the feedback on previous posts elsewhere and the blood soaked trail of breadcrumbs here! I'm sure you'll regret it!  :afro:

Woody:

I really like this - I feel the passion and frustration in your words - I'll need to re-read to come up with any constructive criticism, but if I'll post if I think of anything.  Keep it up mate!  :cool:


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« Reply #56 on: March 18, 2010, 02:43:26 PM »
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« Reply #57 on: April 17, 2010, 07:20:58 PM »
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« Last Edit: January 29, 2011, 06:26:12 PM by Woody »
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« Reply #58 on: December 31, 2010, 06:32:18 PM »
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« Reply #59 on: December 31, 2010, 11:00:16 PM »
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« Last Edit: January 29, 2011, 06:25:25 PM by Woody »
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