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Offline NoxInflux

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MINI-POEM: Black Triangle
« on: January 18, 2010, 04:12:31 PM »

[A poem on a UFO sighting]

Black Triangle
BY MBL (Nox Influx)

Black Triangle
On each corner a light
Comes each  day
And flies at night
Does it scare me?
It might

(I've slightly changed a few words from the original, open to comments..)

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« Reply #1 on: January 18, 2010, 05:24:20 PM »
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« Last Edit: February 25, 2011, 08:10:08 PM by Woody »
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Re: MINI-POEM: Black Triangle
« Reply #2 on: January 19, 2010, 11:32:35 AM »
Hey Woody.

Thanks for the comments.

The poem is very short, it just kid of popped in my head, I felt for some reason that if I added much more it'd take away from the short simplicity.

Although a follow up poem on the same topic is a very good idea.

It's based off a real life UFO encounter that happened to me. I've seen a couple.

The "BLACK TRIANGLE" was the 1st large UFO I ever saw. I was about 13, maybe 14. I was in a small town in the middle of the afternoon. Along with 2 friends. We were walking along a road in the suburbs, suddenlt a black object in the sky caught my attention. At first it was like a flat line, because it was still and flat. Then it turned upwards, exposing it's underside which was like onyx. Black and shiny. Like I said (on each corner a light) but I can't remember the light colours. Then it shot straight up into the sky, it didn't seem to get smaller, just went straight up above clouds and vanished. This was a big black thing. Someone else must of seen it! 2 people with me did not. The problem was that the whole event maybe lasted 8 seconds, I was lucky to see it.

I had never heard of black triangle UFO's. About 6 years later, black triangle UFO's were all over the internet, perhaps being one of the most common kind seen.

Comments?

Nox Influx

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