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“Sorry squ- lad,” the clown crouched with an audible crack and rested his hands on his knees. “I didn't mean to swear atcha. I'm just cranky in the morning. Friends?” He grinned broadly, revealing perfectly decent teeth. Josh nodded, his eyes still wide. “Great stuff,” Bungle said, and stood up with another knee-crack. “Please accept my most humble apology, Mr Jackson,” Bungle bowed awkwardly, with another tip of his hat. “Thank you,” Sam said, even though he suspected the clown was taking the piss. Mister Bungle smiled briefly and slunk away, lighting up a fresh cigarette as he did so.
“Sorry squ- lad,” the clown crouched with an audible crack and rested his hands on his knees. “I didn't mean to swear atcha. I'm just cranky in the morning. Friends?” He grinned broadly, revealing perfectly decent teeth. Josh nodded, his eyes still wide. Bungle told him that was cool, and asked Josh to accept his humblest apologies. Sam said thank you, and Bungle smiled and slunk away..
The editor who told you not to begin a new paragraph with dialogue was talking through his backside, frankly.
Where's Pharosian? He's good on this sort of stuff.
Hey Delph, I never thought that for a second It was the mention of someone talking out of their backside followed by a request for Pharo' as he's good at such stuff that made me smile... Derek
Quote from: delboy on April 22, 2010, 10:27:34 AMHey Delph, I never thought that for a second It was the mention of someone talking out of their backside followed by a request for Pharo' as he's good at such stuff that made me smile... DerekA DELicate DELema averted!Phew!DW