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Charlie In The Box
Charlie in The Box
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Re: Got a boring story where nothing happens?
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January 15, 2011, 06:38:47 PM »
Too funny guys, loving this thread!!
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Ready to hunker down in my box for the weekend, to finish my story!!
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Re: Got a boring story where nothing happens?
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January 18, 2011, 03:28:11 AM »
UPDATE: - whomsoever outbids all for the story 'piller of smoke' [that stands to win 1 000 pounds in the bridgeport comp] ---gets this pooem FREE, to do with as they wish!!
[the unique inclusion of a footnote into the body of the poem, perhaps makes it a contender for the poetry section of the bridgeport prize ---- perhaps, perhaps its 2 for the price of 1]
madly in love
by LashSlash
she
un
-re
-trievable
wafts unstuck.
sips of lunatic-love
& helical-echos
laced with
straight-jacket
& slipknot
elixir
steeped
in
Impassionus Composticards
*
the man-in-her-moon
should
have
known
better
on a couch of the shards
of their shattered chalice
s/he manages love,
with both on top
un
-be
-lievable
*
Love-Rot
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LashSlash
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Re: Got a boring story where nothing happens?
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January 22, 2011, 02:12:58 PM »
.... well, lets see who has the last laugh - when i enter the brigeport AND WIN with the
piller of smoke
flash story....
.... and there i was under the impression that most of you were all ambitiously clamouring for fame & fortune... funny how i am so easily misled!
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