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Offline Charlie In The Box

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Re: Got a boring story where nothing happens?
« Reply #30 on: January 15, 2011, 06:38:47 PM »
Too funny guys, loving this thread!!
Ready to hunker down in my box for the weekend, to finish my story!!

Offline LashSlash

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Re: Got a boring story where nothing happens?
« Reply #31 on: January 18, 2011, 03:28:11 AM »
UPDATE: -  whomsoever  outbids all for the  story 'piller of smoke'  [that stands to win 1 000 pounds in the bridgeport comp] ---gets this pooem FREE, to do with as they wish!!
[the unique inclusion of a footnote into the body of the poem, perhaps makes it a contender for the poetry section of the bridgeport prize  ---- perhaps, perhaps its 2 for the price of 1]


madly in love

by LashSlash


she
 
un
-re
-trievable
 

wafts unstuck.
sips of lunatic-love
& helical-echos
laced with
straight-jacket
& slipknot

elixir
steeped
in Impassionus Composticards*
the man-in-her-moon
should
have
known
better

on a couch of the shards
of their shattered chalice
s/he manages love,
with both on top
 
un
-be
-lievable
*Love-Rot
« Last Edit: January 18, 2011, 03:44:22 AM by LashSlash »

Offline LashSlash

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Re: Got a boring story where nothing happens?
« Reply #32 on: January 22, 2011, 02:12:58 PM »
.... well, lets see who has the last laugh - when i enter the brigeport AND WIN  with the piller of smoke flash story....

.... and there i was under the impression that most of you were all ambitiously clamouring for fame & fortune... funny how i am so easily misled!


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