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Offline Prisoner24601

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Re: Crit group
« Reply #75 on: March 22, 2012, 05:40:54 AM »
I'm in.

Offline Rook

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Re: Crit group
« Reply #76 on: March 22, 2012, 06:45:44 AM »
I'm out. Way too busy, I'm afraid.  :shocked:
I think, Sebastian, there for I am.
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Offline william

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Re: Crit group
« Reply #77 on: March 22, 2012, 07:14:00 AM »
Yeah. I'm out too. Good to be busy...but not for writing.

Offline ozmosis7

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Re: Crit group
« Reply #78 on: March 22, 2012, 11:32:22 AM »
I'm still out I'm afraid.
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Offline Geoff_N

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Re: Crit group
« Reply #79 on: March 22, 2012, 01:53:32 PM »
I'm a strong maybe.

Offline Pharosian

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Re: Crit group
« Reply #80 on: March 23, 2012, 09:01:11 AM »
Possibly. Been writing some scenes from what is a larger work. Don't know if I can make any of them stand-alone.

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Re: Crit group
« Reply #81 on: March 23, 2012, 01:53:01 PM »
Mark me as a maybe.

Pharo, I know a scene by itself doesn't exactly lend itself to a full critique in relation to the entire crit-template, but it might be worth running a scene through anyway. Good scenes and chapters tend to have the same arc (in miniature) as a good short story. At least you'd find out if anyone would like to contiune reading.  :smiley:

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Offline Pharosian

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Re: Crit group
« Reply #82 on: April 01, 2012, 10:34:06 AM »
Okay, everyone that said they were in this month, it's time to post! Rev? stark? fnord? Get cracking!  :2funny:

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Re: Crit group
« Reply #83 on: April 01, 2012, 01:04:50 PM »
The story I am working on still needs work. Maybe next month.

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Re: Crit group
« Reply #84 on: April 01, 2012, 02:31:04 PM »
I can't access it. Not sure what I'm doing wrong.  :cheesy:

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Re: Crit group
« Reply #85 on: April 01, 2012, 03:28:49 PM »
Oops, forgot what day it was. I don't have time to format before I go to work, but it'll be up tonight.
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Re: Crit group
« Reply #86 on: April 01, 2012, 05:08:05 PM »
I can't access it. Not sure what I'm doing wrong.  :cheesy:

Try again. I must have taken you off the Critter group a while back, but I've put you on again, now :afro:
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Re: Crit group
« Reply #87 on: April 02, 2012, 06:45:18 AM »
I'm just finishing off my story, and should have it posted by tonight! WOOP!
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Re: Crit group
« Reply #88 on: April 02, 2012, 08:25:27 AM »
Oh, okay. Thanks Ed!

Offline starktheground

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Re: Crit group
« Reply #89 on: April 03, 2012, 09:32:04 AM »
Crit question: We have one week to do the crits, and then the next week is for edits and discussion? Is that correct?

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