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Offline Edward Fellers

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A very old poem
« on: July 01, 2012, 07:45:27 AM »
I wrote this a long time ago. It's very short but it's one of my favorites.

Standing At The Edge Of The World

Standing at the edge of the world,
with no where else to go.
Angels flying up above,
demons down below.
With arms spread wide
and head held high.
I boldly leap,
and hope I'll fly.
If it moves kill it again.

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Re: A very old poem
« Reply #1 on: July 01, 2012, 08:13:48 AM »
Reads like a motto - a long form of something you might have inscribed on a family crest, or something.

Simple but effective verse.

Offline LashSlash

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Re: A very old poem
« Reply #2 on: July 01, 2012, 10:56:00 AM »
dive-bomb the demons

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