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Author Topic: A last, lingering look at summer  (Read 1206 times)
marc_chagall
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« on: September 22, 2015, 05:29:50 PM »

Carole Bromley's selection of summer poems, including one of mine  afro http://www.yorkmix.com/things-to-do/poetry-blog-a-last-lingering-look-at-summer/
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« Reply #1 on: September 22, 2015, 05:34:18 PM »

Cool. I'm a doofus when it comes to poetry, but I liked Now That You’re Gone. Feels a little sad.
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« Reply #2 on: September 22, 2015, 11:58:18 PM »

Great poem, great critique.

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« Reply #3 on: September 23, 2015, 03:18:41 AM »

I too generally don't get poetry - it often seems like pretentious twaddle especially when read out loud in monotone drone.

Enjoyed your Now that you're gone - apt for our summer - was that it?

Sometimes a poem hits a like nerve such as Kay Buckley's through smoke. I enjoy the juxtaposition of unrelated words such as "slow shape"

Thanks for the share, Catherine, and congratulations again!
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« Reply #4 on: September 25, 2015, 06:06:20 AM »

Thanks guys - glad to have got you all reading poetry  Wink
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