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« on: October 02, 2015, 08:05:33 AM »

My story To Have One's Cake won September's flash fiction competition in Writers' Forum magazine - and just as importantly put a hundred quid in my sky rocket.

Thanks to Cathy (sorry if it sounds like an Oscars' acceptance speech) for reading the story and giving me some valuable feedback.

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P.S. 'sky rocket' = Cockney rhyming slang for 'pocket', if you wondered
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« Reply #1 on: October 02, 2015, 10:46:35 AM »

Very nice!  afro
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« Reply #2 on: October 02, 2015, 03:40:00 PM »

Oh, excellent! I shall bask in reflected glory  cheers
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« Reply #3 on: October 02, 2015, 04:58:53 PM »

Oh, excellent! I shall bask in reflected glory  cheers

Cheers guys

As you may recall, Cathy, it wasn't a straightforward story. I always try to get an opinion on this type of story, and always from someone insightful.

DW Cheesy
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« Reply #4 on: October 04, 2015, 06:16:59 AM »

Congrats Womble afro

How long was the flash?
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« Reply #5 on: October 04, 2015, 06:19:59 AM »

Congrats Womble afro

How long was the flash?

Cheers, Ed. It was 500 words exactly.

This month they want a Halloween story, 800 words max, deadline tomorrow.

DW Cheesy
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« Reply #6 on: October 05, 2015, 02:39:28 AM »

Congrats Womble afro

How long was the flash?

Cheers, Ed. It was 500 words exactly.

This month they want a Halloween story, 800 words max, deadline tomorrow.

DW Cheesy

Word lengths around that sub 1000 count feel quite liberating after getting used to just 350 I find. Or should I say 'found' -- haven't written much fiction lately.

Are you entering a story for the Halloween one?
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« Reply #7 on: October 06, 2015, 09:48:35 AM »

Congrats DW and vicariously to Delph.

I've been submitting this year but only 3 acceptances for anthos and mags. Methinks my email outbox is directly linked to a black hole.
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« Reply #8 on: October 07, 2015, 02:50:58 PM »

Alas, Ed, my Halloween story got disqualified. They specifically wanted a 'ghost story' and I wrote about a vampire.

That said, I've sent the story elsewhere.

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« Reply #9 on: October 15, 2015, 02:10:43 AM »

Nice one, Womble! (And Delph!)  dance
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